These boys were very proud
of themselves and their writing. Their teacher sent them across as they has
really launched into some super writing about the thunder and rain we have been
having.
For boys to write
well,they need to have subjects that they want to write about.
Thunder is very
exciting and it really grabbed their attention.
Brodie was almost hit
by a lightning bolt, Ben used the word Wild Wet Weather and Griffin thought the
thunder was COOL!
Well Done Gentlemen.
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